唯一一堵还算坚固的混凝土墙，已经裂成四分之一英尺大小的碎块。
The once-solid concrete walk was cracked into quarter-size fragments.
（这是开篇第二段里的句子，walk能看成是wall，也算奇葩了吧）
我是两周前参加高中入学活动时认识阿什莉的。入学活动是针对新来的学生（比如阿什莉和我）和高一新生进行的。
I met Ashley three weeks ago at high school orientation for both new kids (Ashley and me, for example) and incoming freshmen,
（三周和两周之误，能说明什么呢？译者你到底用了几分心思？？）
体育老师是欧文斯女士，她脸上的微笑看上去像是醉鬼画上去的。她首先鼓励我们。
Ms. Owens, a PE teacher with a smile that looked like it’d been painted on by a drunk clown, started off by trying to fire us up.
（是drunk clown,喝醉酒了的小丑啊）
在世界上的某个地方——某个偏僻的地方，可能会有比我更大的傻瓜，但我不敢肯定。
Somewhere in this world—in China or India or a remote section of Africa—there was probably a bigger dork than me. But I couldn’t swear to that.
（难道是因为C国的关系而要和谐？）
我指着她空空的裙兜，“你吃过午餐了吗？”
I pointed at her empty lap. “Did you bring lunch?”
（lap是什么意思，麻烦自学一下吧。)
那是三周前的事情了。
That was three weeks ago.
(看到没，这一处翻译对了，那么说明译者和编辑都是怎么干活的？一个章节前后情节不一致也不去管）
她拿起叉子，开始拨弄着食物。我这时才注意到，她眉毛上穿了洞，看上去让人觉得很痛。“我真正的名字是埃玛，但人人都叫我伊玛。”
“为什么？”
“你要调查户口？”
“好主意，”我摇摇头，“不过我只是想知道怎样称呼你。”
她不情愿地说：“伊玛。”
She picked up her fork and started playing with her food. I noticed now that she had pierced eyebrows. Ouch. “My real first name is Emma. But everyone calls me Ema.”